Earlier today I showed my finished digipak and advert designs to three members of my class and they brought up some suggestions about what's right and wrong about the video, and what can be done to improve it.
- Some of the text is hard to read
- I could use Photoshop to improve the colours
- The usage of HMV is a bit too obvious and it pulls attention away and I could also improve the font a bit by making it relate to the picture.
- On a brighter note, The Indie genre its trying to achieve is done well and the images are fantastic quality-wise
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